File[Patrick's First Flash.swf] - (18 KB)
[_] [L] My first flash Patrick 02/03/11(Thu)17:52 No.1461786
How does it look?
Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] Anonymous 02/03/11(Thu)17:54 No.1461788
>:(
It looks like a dick!
Work on where the dick and the balls connect. Seems to be a little... separated. And I don't
really watch flaccid penises to much so I don't know how they move but, I would work on it. It
kind of looks like it is banging its head against the ground.
>> [_] Anonymous 02/03/11(Thu)18:31 No.1461797
it's mute
>> [_] Anonymous 02/03/11(Thu)18:46 No.1461805
>>1461797
lol don't know how to add music
>> [_] Anonymous 02/03/11(Thu)18:50 No.1461808
>>1461805
For context, it's utter rubbish. :D
But you show promise with animation, sometimes fluidity is key, and you're showing that you're
capable of making good animations.
But you should stick more detail into your frames.
Like sticking that extra colour in to create the impression of shadow.
Do you use a graphics tablet?
>> [_] Anonymous 02/03/11(Thu)20:12 No.1461841
>>1461805
when you figure out how to, add chiptune music and maybe make the background flash colors
>> [_] Anonymous 02/03/11(Thu)22:09 No.1461894
>>1461841
Seconding this. I'll be on the lookout for it, OP.
>> [_] G. D. !!k1u7swmD0lH 02/03/11(Thu)23:47 No.1461942
>add chiptune music
Agreed. I look at this Flash, and something just starts playing "Turkey in the Straw" in my head.
That's just me, though - I don't know if that sounds weird to anyone else.
>> [_] Anonymous 02/04/11(Fri)00:07 No.1461954
I fucking love it! MORE FLOPPY DICKS!
>> [_] Anonymous 02/04/11(Fri)00:22 No.1461961
I like your style, kid.
>> [_] Anonymous 02/04/11(Fri)00:25 No.1461962
i love how people seem to somehow be taking this seriously
>> [_] Anonymous 02/04/11(Fri)00:42 No.1461968
OP here, really glad you all seem to like it. I actually was originally going to try and get some
audio in there but I figured it was too much hassle for a simple test, but now I think I'll
improve this a little and send it on back in a day or so and see how you like it. Thanks for your
comments!
>> [_] Anonymous 02/04/11(Fri)00:54 No.1461972
Needs seizure colors and the Benny Hill theme blasting
Also, put a tophat and monocle on the dick
