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This is resource Q1RNPKA, an Archived Thread.
Discovered:22/5 -2020 18:04:25

Ended:23/5 -2020 04:45:46

Checked:23/5 -2020 07:10:26

Original location: https://boards.4chan.org/f/thread/3429144/some-shit-i-ma…
Recognized format: Yes, thread post count is 13.
Discovered flash files: 1


regret.swf
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File: regret.swf-(8.65 MB, 1920x1080, Other)
[_] Some shit I made. Anonymous 05/22/20(Fri)12:01:06 No.3429144

  I'm going to assume you clicked on the SWF before reading this, so I will apologize about the
  horrid voice acting ahead of time. I have no budget.

  Anyway, I posted this back when only the menu was functioning, and you guys helped me out with
  the issues I was having with it. Now I can safely say the entire animatic for this is done, and
  the more I think about it, the more of a feeling I get that I regret a lot of decisions I made
  when making this thing.

  Before I go about actually animating and finalizing all the scenes, I just need some critique on
  this crap in it's current state so I can make a list of changes that need to be made. Don't hold
  anything back; every bit of criticism will only help out in the long run. Thanks in advance.

Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] Anonymous 05/22/20(Fri)14:26:58 No.3429153

  use text to speech for voice acting.

>> [_] Anonymous 05/22/20(Fri)14:52:37 No.3429155

  >>3429144
  im not the person you want for feedback, i thought it was great as is, lol

>> [_] Anonymous 05/22/20(Fri)15:40:28 No.3429168

  yeah, idk
  this smells of early newgrounds era furry flashes, if that's what you were going for it's fine

>> [_] Anonymous 05/22/20(Fri)16:20:12 No.3429176

  >>3429144
  I enjoyed it a lot! Blackheart was very cute!

>> [_] Anonymous 05/22/20(Fri)16:38:24 No.3429177

  >>3429144
  That's actually pretty cute. Like
  >>3429168
  Says, it really reminds me of that kind of thing.
  As for VA's, I don't know, but you could hit up /soc/ voice threads and ask there.
  Also The tower looks like a benis lol

>> [_] Anonymous 05/22/20(Fri)17:53:28 No.3429190

  >>3429144
  It's quite sweet, can't give any criticism though, not because there ain't any to give, I'm just
  bad at criticizing, sorry.
  Best of luck with the project.

>> [_] :v 05/22/20(Fri)18:12:56 No.3429194

  Certainly can't fault you for ambition, nj /f/gt

>> [_] Anonymous 05/22/20(Fri)19:15:04 No.3429200

  Cough
  I'm a VA, you need help?

>> [_] Anonymous 05/22/20(Fri)19:35:02 No.3429203

  It's almost a good start, just needs some actual world building / character development, because
  there's only like two scenes worth of that, not enough to make anyone invested.

>> [_] Anonymous 05/22/20(Fri)22:17:05 No.3429222

  >>3429144
  I'm surprised it's not porn and happy someone's making a legit flash animation in 2020!

  Hope you'll share the finished flash result with us and not just make it a video on youtube. (You
  can upload the flash animation on boards.swfchan.net if it ends up too big for /f/ and link it
  from here.)

>> [_] Anonymous 05/22/20(Fri)22:34:03 No.3429225

  My suggestions:
  Cut the narration out as much as you possibly can. The same rules as filmmaking apply here. Show,
  don't tell. Narration is for books and flash is a visual medium.

  I don't feel like the minigames really add anything, certainly they aren't necessary. Unless you
  want to make the whole thing a point-and-click adventure I would stick to just animation

>> [_] Anonymous 05/22/20(Fri)22:40:20 No.3429228

  OP here.
  >>3429155
  >>3429168
  >>3429176
  >>3429190
  >>3429177
  Thanks. Good to know that it is somewhat heading in the right direction.

  >this smells of early newgrounds era furry flashes
  Yeh, I was trying somewhat to evoke that feeling around the third act. Admitidly, this is just a
  redo of a project I made for school two years ago, when I was still a cringe teenager. It's not
  something that is to be taken too seriously. Lul.

  >As for VA's, I don't know, but you could hit up /soc/ voice threads and ask there
  I didn't know /soc/ had VA threads; I was under the impression that place was nothing but
  Facebook plebs trying to get laid. Thanks for the info, I'll definitely keep it in mind.

  >>3429200
  Thank you. I'd take you up on the offer, but I don't know what I could offer in return; I'm a bit
  short on gas station buxx at the moment.

  >>3429203
  Yee, I regret not rewriting the script to have more buildup. Thanks for the advice. I will add an
  extra act in between the second and third that goes a bit more in-depth about the scenario.



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