File: discophrenia 7.swf-(6.42 MB, 800x580, Other)
[_] /r/ for feedback inside. Anonymous 05/30/24(Thu)00:24:21 No.

  (To the archiver, Sorry for the repost)
  https://vocaroo.com/19AMUZw1sJsD
  Someone sent me isolated vocals using a vocal remover.
  I used AI vocals to sing, but not this one.
  I was pretty entertained; what do you think Anon.

  My singing isn't quite there yet, I hope my neighbors don't mind my future attempts. I don't like
  the gasping or breathyness

  w/e

>> [_] Anonymous 05/30/24(Thu)03:56:06 No.

  >>3508311
  • Some of the notes are a bit off key, sounds like a lot of correcting needs to be made. Could be
  wearing headphones and not hearing your own voice which could be causing the offkey notes.
  • Definitely the gasping and breathyness, sounds like you're out of breath and having
  difficulties singing some notes due to being exhausted. Would recommend something with slower
  lyrics to practice more tonality.
  • Lastly, although it makes sense you have neighbors, it sounds closer to whispering through your
  microphone to avoid waking up neighbors. Maybe try during the day or a time period where you
  could be louder. That would probably allow you to hit the tone you're looking for more
  consistently.

  All in all, if you keep practicing, perhaps with a slower lyrical song with less words, you can
  work on your tones and your breathyness as well as improving your confidence with yourself. You
  got this anon, believe in me who believes in you.

  Also, the Chocolate Rain, "I move away from the mic to breathe in" thing.

>> [_] Anonymous 05/30/24(Thu)10:55:23 No.

  >>3508311
  discophrenia anon banzaaai!

>> [_] Anonymous 05/30/24(Thu)11:54:21 No.

  >>3508311
  It's so nostalgic, like some sort of borrowed nostalgia.
  I don't get the audio thing. Is that a kid singing? Is that the one made with AI? Like the first
  anon said there's some big clashes with the keyboard background tunes, overlapping the voice,
  making it almost unusable.
  The man voice in the flash (your original voice?) is much much better, and it works with that
  nostalgic feeling. AI is quite new, I'm sure you will find the right voice app pretty soon.

>> [_] Anonymous 05/30/24(Thu)12:07:19 No.

  >>3508320
  >>3508316
  >>3508318

  Thank you anons;

  So -- Ive been trying to promote my music a bit more; I'm a little less afraid now. I've been
  pasting my soundcloud and bandcamp in /mu/

  Going over OP post; The original song had AI vocals in them; the vocaroo upload has Taylor Swift
  AI vocals (lol). My girlfriend's been complaining that 1) I should use my own voice 2)
  Garfield/Lorenzo music etc isn't really a singing voice; I've been using that voice for most of
  the videos -- so I tried a different voice in the vocaroo, with weird results

  I definitely need to learn to record better and be less shy, and learn not to breathe in the
  middle of a verse; breathing at the end is fine, some musicians have done it in some of their
  songs.

  Thank you /f/ for being kind, I appreciate that, and all the feedback. Hopefully I will get
  better; thank you :bow:

>> [_] Anonymous 05/30/24(Thu)19:31:38 No.

  >>3508321
  *move away from the mic to breath in*
  CHOCOLATE RAIIIIIN

>> [_] Anonymous 05/30/24(Thu)19:44:43 No.

  >>3508321
  Keep at it anon and don't give up! Would love if you posted more often with your results to see
  how you've improved, kinda like those draw threads how they start out pretty shitty but then get
  better and better. /f/'s own diva making it big.

  >>3508333
  SOME STAY DRY AND OTHERS FEEL THE PAIN

>> [_] Anonymous 05/31/24(Fri)02:54:18 No.

  >>3508311
  this is great i'm gonna sing this all day lol

>> [_] Anonymous 05/31/24(Fri)02:59:14 No.

  >>3508321
  Breathe in smoke until i'm fried.

>> [_] Anonymous 05/31/24(Fri)03:46:21 No.

  reminds me of negativexp but not gay and faggy at all

>> [_] Anonymous 05/31/24(Fri)06:28:18 No.

  >>3508321
  Dude, I need to find your other song, it goes like "I don't wanna say goodbye, I don't wanna say
  forever" and I remember you've made a typo in the title while posting it on /f/ for the first
  time and now I can't find it. Help me please

>> [_] Anonymous 05/31/24(Fri)07:34:23 No.

  >>3508349
  I never found out why I couldn't find it on swfchan, but I'll reupload it again soon.

>> [_] Anonymous 05/31/24(Fri)07:47:45 No.

  >>3508349
  http://swfchan.com/51/254490/?discrophenia5finalSorry.swf

>> [_] Anonymous 05/31/24(Fri)10:46:57 No.

  Enjoyed this flash a lot
  I browse /f/ at 3 am hoping to find things like this
  Never seen your work before
  Gonna go dive in the archive later